Comments on: How to write a lead sentence http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/ Like Mighty Mouse for papers. Wed, 02 Dec 2009 16:47:49 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: graphoniac http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-357 graphoniac Tue, 14 Jul 2009 16:24:05 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-357 Thank you for the kind words, Kimberly! It was a joy to work with you. Thank you for the kind words, Kimberly! It was a joy to work with you.

]]> By: graphoniac http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-355 graphoniac Tue, 14 Jul 2009 16:21:33 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-355 It can be used, but it has to be an outstanding question to be strong. example: What do you do when you find a man living in your attic? It can be used, but it has to be an outstanding question to be strong.

example:
What do you do when you find a man living in your attic?

]]> By: Kimberly Ivens http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-354 Kimberly Ivens Tue, 14 Jul 2009 16:01:12 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-354 I began looking on the internet for ideas on a lead sentence for my essay when I found this site. I noticed under the services tab that I could get a basic edit or a deep edit. My essay was relatively complete already and was worth 1/5 of my grade, so it was worth it to me to invest a little money into keeping the 'A' I had in the class. What a deal! My essay was returned to me the very next day with tons of useful ideas, suggestions, grammatical tips, word choice input, and questions that I had never considered. After reviewing the edits and correcting my paper, I took advantage of the second free edit and there was still more suggestions on the return. The process of refining my paper really helped turn a so-so paper into a winning essay. Well worth the money and even more because I kept my 'A' in the class due to the improvements made to one essay. If your grade means anything to you, use this service. It's well worth the small investment. I began looking on the internet for ideas on a lead sentence for my essay when I found this site. I noticed under the services tab that I could get a basic edit or a deep edit. My essay was relatively complete already and was worth 1/5 of my grade, so it was worth it to me to invest a little money into keeping the ‘A’ I had in the class. What a deal! My essay was returned to me the very next day with tons of useful ideas, suggestions, grammatical tips, word choice input, and questions that I had never considered. After reviewing the edits and correcting my paper, I took advantage of the second free edit and there was still more suggestions on the return. The process of refining my paper really helped turn a so-so paper into a winning essay. Well worth the money and even more because I kept my ‘A’ in the class due to the improvements made to one essay. If your grade means anything to you, use this service. It’s well worth the small investment.

]]> By: rosie http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-237 rosie Fri, 10 Apr 2009 15:21:07 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-237 can a question ever be a lead for a news story? example: What are the MCAs and what do you need to know about them? can a question ever be a lead for a news story?

example:
What are the MCAs and what do you need to know about them?

]]> By: graphoniac http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-80 graphoniac Thu, 23 Oct 2008 19:48:38 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-80 How can I help you? How can I help you?

]]> By: bob http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-79 bob Thu, 23 Oct 2008 01:16:13 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-79 It was good advice but it did not help me It was good advice but it did not help me

]]> By: graphoniac http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-70 graphoniac Thu, 09 Oct 2008 15:42:14 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-70 Jim- Thanks. What's next? Whatever I can find! :) Michael- Glad I could help! Jim- Thanks. What’s next? Whatever I can find! :)

Michael- Glad I could help!

]]> By: Michael Miller http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-69 Michael Miller Thu, 09 Oct 2008 15:19:44 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-69 Great advice. Thank you so much. I had the rest of my paper written and my professor said i lacked a good lead in sentence. That is the hardest part of writing a paper in my opinion. Thank you again. Great advice. Thank you so much. I had the rest of my paper written and my professor said i lacked a good lead in sentence. That is the hardest part of writing a paper in my opinion. Thank you again.

]]> By: Jim Bessey http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/2008/08/22/how-to-write-a-lead-sentence/#comment-38 Jim Bessey Tue, 02 Sep 2008 02:45:58 +0000 http://mywritinghelp.wordpress.com/?p=270#comment-38 Well done! Good advice from start to finish. What's next? :) ~Jim Well done! Good advice from start to finish. What’s next? :) ~Jim

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