When writing a paper in first person, it can be very easy to use the word “I” far too often. The paper will clearly be written from the author’s perspective, but the reader does not want to be overwhelmed with references to the author. The biggest problem is starting sentences with “I (insert verb or verb phrase).” Try doing a word search on your first-person paper. (In Word, go to Edit>Find.) If you find more than two sentences in a row with the same start, try to change one of them. Your reader will appreciate it.
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March 12, 2009 at 10:36 am
What do you think of a person who uses “I” 37 times in 413 words?
I would sincerely like your opinion. Please email me the answer.
March 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My answer: it depends. Sometimes it’s just that the author hasn’t taken the time to revise or refine his work. Sometimes it’s necessary or hard to avoid using “I” or “me” several times in a short space. And, this may surprise you: sometimes intentionally “breaking” grammar guidelines can be an effective tool. I can’t pass a judgement on a writer based strictly on how many times he refers to himself in so many words.